Nice concept, but maybe it's the lighting, maybe it would have been more effective b/w, for some reason I think it is not a very interesting picture to look at. Anyway 6 for the sharp focus
All the clutter around the bike gives the message of the bike rarely getting used which is what I think you are trying to say. But it also makes the photo rather uncomfortable to look at...try composing in way that gives the eye a place to rest in this very busy scene.