Some of the cropping is fine but there is a strnage balck thing near the Queen. Your lighting drops off in the top right corner - perhaps some vigneting or something causing a shadow from your flash.
You need to work on the lighting. The top is dark, the bottom is soaked in white or fluorescent light. I think this would look nicer in colored light or on a dark or shiney table cloth.
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