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Couple of things that aren't working for me in this shot: First, the composition seems really off and out of balance. The statue and building elements in the right and lower right are really heavy and the negative space in the upper left doesn't offset them. If you could have managed an angle that would have placed the tower further to the left of the frame, that might have helped. Second, it looks as if you have either desaturated the statue or it is being lit differently from the background buildings. This gives the effect of the statue not being a true part of the composition, but rather something that was cut and paste in. (Note, I'm not saying that you did PS the statue in, just that the color and light on the statue give that impression.) This detracts from the impressiveness of the angles used to achieve this natural composition. One other thing, while the subjects do seem out of time to the present, I don't know that they are readily out of time to each other. Seems like there is a lot of potential here, but the execution needs work. |
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