I'm not a fan of the HDR style PP used on the kids face.
It would be alot better if you could of gotten the eye in the glass clear and sharp, with a bit more colour maybe.
Right then, joke's on me as I now have to plough through 564 images and bump them all (yes, all of them) up. There'll be a third run through for fine tuning. It's day two now and I'm running late, sorry.