Good sense of motion, but the composition and expression on the subject's face are very mundane. the fact that the face is out of focus just makes it seem that much more like a MySpace snapshot.
Assuming by the composition and the position of the left arm, that this is a self portrait. Next time I would suggest a smaller aperature for more depth of field. This will give you more wiggle room to be in focus. |
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