Great weathered face on your subject, normally I'd say get in much closer unless the surrounding frame is important to your shot (I'm not sure your window frame adds much, though it does help explain the reflective glass). Why "Help Me" as a title?
I want to see a close up of him ... I think that the awning is distracting and draws my attention away from this interesting man ... I'll bet he's got some fascinating stories to tell ...
I love this shot. However, just my personal opinion, I would like it without the top shutters (or overhang, whatever the metal is). That would draw my eye in more to the subject. I think cropping the top inch will make a huge impact. (again, just my opinion).