Simple subject and nice minimalist approach.
The line of the stalk creates an interesting line
Part of the plant is a little dark.
There is a little bit sensor dust (?) in the lower left hand corner that could have been cloned or cropped out.
The sky is a little flat. A bit of postprocessing would create a bit more drama.
The image could be a little sharper or a little softer.
Composition:
A little lacking unfortunately. A more vertical composition would give this more of a restful feel. More diagonal and it would imply more motion.
I am curious how this would look with the stalk coming out of the corner of the frame.
The challenge:
Interesting and unique approach to the challenge. Some might call this DNMC (those who are narrow minded) I would disagree. I like the fresh take that this exhibits. |