Morning Flash,
Concept is nice, to much grunge. The building looks out of place along with the tires on the rare of the trailer. The piece of paper in the back ground in front of building is distracting. The wind sheild on the other bike gives the impression it is dirty, not grunge. The back ground is to busy eye keeps wondering. The black line along his leg takes out part of his leg. I would have liked to see more detail in the bike & he seems distracted by something to his right.
Frankie |