Good soft focus, good composition. You should try to eliminate distractions from the background next time--those envelopes and papers on the desk, as well as the desk top
nice composition and thoughtful cropping - although i\'m not sure the background really benefits the photo here - moving around to a more empty/blank bg could have been nice. interestingly enough, my girlfriend says your subject looks familiar - so i'll have to check back on your locale when the challenge is over.
great expression, great soft focus effect. I like how she is leaning on her arms - nice dark sweater with a sublte lined texture. All this works very well. but ACK! those white pieces of paper behind, distracting. this would be so lovely without them - just a solid white or black or some subtle background! 7
CUTE. Just a really cute girl. Wonderful coloring both the hair and skin. Wonderful model and natural smile. I love this shot, her pose is so good. Good luck. 9