white bg does not seem to be the best for the intended dramatic mood. besides I think a real "WHAT!?!" produces some additional tension this shot does not show. I would try putting the camera a bit lower to have a better perspective of the hands, forming a triangle with the face, but that is just my opinnion.. what do I know?
I really like this, and wonder if it would have worked better without the black top she is wearing...it would have been a great ipod looking white on white image 8