While the grungy look is great for her and the background, I wonder if the postman should be a little cleaner and brighter. The yellow in the back leads my eyes right to her (not that I'm complaining), but she's out of focus.
Right then, joke's on me as I now have to plough through 564 images and bump them all (yes, all of them) up. There'll be a third run through for fine tuning. It's day two three now and I'm running late, sorry.
I'm usually not a fan of heavily processed images, but the PP works well for this shot. Gritty and textured sliding to smooth and sultry; very nice. - 9