Focus is a bit off. Not too sure about the composition, it looks like a snapshot most probably because of the lighting used. Try a reflector with aluminum foil or soften it with a reflector sheet.
There was another shot of the same phones on the same book. Not really sure how this fits into the challenge. It's just a bunch of phones on a busy background.
A bit too predictable with the multiple phones, nice idea bringing in a phonebook though, the juxtaposition of the "7 oclock" phone is killing me though I want to push it over to left to straigten out the implied middle shape.
I really don't get what you're going for here? What are you trying to communicate? It lust seems a bit fuddled...
Also technically the lighting is off and the clutter in the background distracts from whatever it is you'rte trying to communicate
Blurry; poor, thoughtless composition; not totally in keeping with the rules of the challenge (no one is using any of the phones); suffering from white-balance issues: altother, a messy, unappealing shot. Sorry.
I am part of the DNMC Police - you need a person using their phone - you didn't follow directions! Wagggh! heheh.... j/k - mine didnt either and I bet you have like 10 comments like that.
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