Either a little too much noise reduction or not sharp or something - all details have been lost in her skin. Otherwise, though, nice composition and expression.
What unusual eyes. This is lovely. Everything sparkles, and there is just enough softness to her skin tone. My only complaint is the width of the image. It seems to be cropped a little too much on the right and appears to be a tight fit. I might have even left a little more at the top, so we could see her complete hairline/forehead.
A good portrait obviously, but IMO her eyes seem over-processed. I was also wondering if the blues (foreground, and background) wouldn't be better off as contrasting colors instead of matching. It might of given it more pop. Still a good photo, very good. GL.