Pretty girl. Nice crop and pose, and I think the focus is fine. The light is what I think hurts this shot. It's a nice bright day but her face seems to be shaded. Have you ever played around with filter>render>lighting effects? A little touch of Omni light might be nice on this. BTW I like the little stray hair too. It makes it look more natural and adds a little highlight.
Your daughter has incredible eyes! I like the angle and the light coming over her shoulder, but I'm not sure I like the crop off the side of her face. Keep shooting her - she's an excellent model!