Creative try, I like that.. something different than the straight on shot. Two things are bothering me though, one is her eyes are almost too light, white turned away from the camera. Second is her hand, it appears she is resting her chin on her hand which is ok, but you've cropped away part of it, her hand needs a bit more room in my opinion. I do really like the colos here though, I think youve got that right on. 6
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