Nice portrait, I just think that maybe the lighting is a bit flat, or maybe it's the colour choice on the background. Maybe gray was a bit drab for a choice. It kind of reminds me of one of those real estate seller photos in the news paper. Very business like. Either way it is still a nice portrait of a nice looking lady :)
Look, I want to be kind here...the subject is pretty and the lighting is nice, but there's nothing interesting about the pose...it looks like a great passport photo. sorry :-( you mightwant to get more creative with the pose to draw attention to her great eyes and face
This has the potential of an A+++ portrait. The colors seem flat, and need to be jazzed up a bit. Not changing the colors or anything, but jazzing them up with levels, or curves would probably do the trick. BTW, beautiful model. GL.
Her skin tone is almost the same as the gray background it needs some adjustments to get her face get the real color. If you made this adjustment on purpose, i dont think it works very well.