frame overwhelms image - doesn't leave me enough to see. Understand selective desat choice though not sure I would have made it. Grain not strong enough to have impact.
It's not a bad border, but I wonder if it might impact your score some? The reason I ask this is because the 640 pixel max is so small to begin with and then the border takes up a good bit of that real estate making your photo even smaller. The smaller the photo, the less visible the detail.
I think your border is heavy and metallic/aluminium-looking: just detracts too much from the image which in itself is lovely and gentle. Love the partial desat.