Very centrally framed. Perhaps zoom out and move the bike to one corner of the shot to make it look more lonely. Light is a little dark but colours are good. - floyd
Focus is very nice on this photo. I like how you can almost see every blade of grass. Definately a childhood thing. Very nice placement. The background is nice to look at as well. Lighting is great. Although there are shadows, the work very nicely and are not distracting at all. Great job and good luck in the challenge.
Ooooh. The basic four colours of a kid's crayon set - my kidhood bedroom was these four colours (and white). I think it's very effective to restrict to such primary colours, and I like the background. The concrete wall doesn't do anything for me, but other than that, great! 6, Kavey
Nice choice of subject, but the lighting seems just a little weak... some extra light would really make the yellow, blue, and red stand out nicely against the green background :) - jmsetzler