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03/20/2007 11:25:16 PM |
Critique Club Comment:
I really like this photograph and think you picked a good name for it. I like that you used your reflector as the backdrop. That was a good idea.
The few things that I think could be better are as follows:
1 - I don't like the extra lines and specs in the vase towards the bottom of the image. It looks like some of them might be reflections while others might be particles in the water or on the outside of the vase.
2 - The water droplets in the air towards the very top of the image are enough out of focus that they are not interesting. I would like to see the camera lowered a couple inches to show more of the vase and less of the air and then scooted forward a bit more to show more detail. Just don't get that camera and lens wet.
3 - I wish the Tomato was larger. This however is not really possible with your choice of vase.
Congratulations on placing 102 out of 428 entries. Keep up the good work!
Thank you,
Skyler Call |
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03/13/2007 01:10:04 PM |
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03/12/2007 05:31:36 PM |
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Very cool. I love the color and motion. |
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03/12/2007 04:31:28 AM |
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very good shot, nut maybe not the most original one |
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03/09/2007 11:13:33 PM |
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Nice capture, but seems more blue than red. |
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03/08/2007 06:33:19 PM |
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03/08/2007 05:26:37 PM |
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Excellent lighting here! :) Nice splash too. But with the composition as such this says more blue to me than red. Perhaps if the tomato wasn't so low in the frame it would've been more of a steady focal point. |
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03/07/2007 09:21:01 PM |
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03/07/2007 07:43:22 PM |
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Not sure if this will handle well in a red challenge, I do like the single composition of the red, and the rest works well.... |
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03/07/2007 12:39:00 AM |
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I, for one, am not tired of the splashing fruit and veggies (yet). But I would have loved to have seen this as a red-on-red image for this challenge (red tomato with a red background). |
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