I think you want me to look at the girls in the background but because of his more prominent placement, the guy sitting on the rock(?) is getting my attention.
most of the people, including your stated central subjects are facing away, and you seem to be too far away. no one is really interacting with the camera or each other. there is very little energy in the photo, making it not very interesting. - 4
I tried to crop the left side of the photo, from the back of the sitting man to the left.. and the small part of the white wall on the right side of the photo. I like it better. Moreover why did you cut the feet of the man and the jewelery sign?
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