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Hi, Greetings from the Critique Club:
Composition: This is great. It is well balanced and yet shows great detail work. The different women and hair really adds more interest to the image instead of a simple mirror style format. I like the idea of different shoes and am pleased you stayed with the same colour range.
Technical: Lighting, focus and settings spot on. No improvement there. I would've, however, cloned out that hideous wall plate. It is very distracting and drops the cleanliness of your image.
Overall: I think you were so close to being up there on the first page...just a tough challenge and only very minor details in your image held you down.
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Check that out... there is actually a bench in the shot. I missed that. Say hey to Amanda and Kristin!
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Tell Amanda and Kristin thanks from me too !
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Great shot Dexter and congrats on your score:)
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Hey that's cheating! They do dress up that drab bench quite nicely, though :)
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Striking shot - the poses could have been improved. 5
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pretty girls get 10's every time
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Very clever. This is a fun shot as well as being clean and well lit.
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Very nice bench - it looks very comfortable
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Lighting seems a little hot, nicely focused.
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NIce shot. Very sharp and well composed. I like the processing. Reminds me of "Soylent Green." Nice furniture.
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Good, well captured, maybe a little over whitened on the eye on the left?
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kind of cool - good composition and wonderful models - it seems to lack a bit of emotion.
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Hot. I'd sit there anyday.
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Nice light - My distractions are...The girls... Only joking.
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nice pic, the bench is not the main focal of the pic so its only an 8
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Fun photo, but seems more about the ladies than the furniture....kind of like a precurser to the Friendship episode of I Love Lucy. 7
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I'll take that empty seat!
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Nice photo, but I feel the focus is more on the girls then the bench.
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