WOW. I guess I'm not surprised about the majority of comments, but I totally find the contrast and harsh lighting to work REALLY well. It's different. It's fun. The lighting gives a fashion/editorial feel. I can see this is a magazine. I really love what you did with it. I had given it a 10.
I am drawn to this originally I wasnt fussed with it but it grew on me Maybe the shadow area is somewhat too dark for my liking but it is a stunner the top right corner to me would also needs brning in
The posture and comp look like it could be in a magazine, but the first thing I thought of when I saw the picture was how blown out part of her face was, then the same on her chest. I think if you fixed that you could be onto a winner though.
Great use of lighting.
Nice crop, good choice of background colour too - really makes the colours stand out.
Superb skin tones and great soft textures on the red elements.
10.