I think this is really nice Griz! I love the tight crop and the angled composition. I missed this when the voting was going on in the challenge, but I would have rated it very high.
Maybe they have a point tho about her not looking into the camera. I think maybe towards him, only looking down, may have been just the thing that pushed this over to a kick-butt score!
The lighting is great and she has beautiful eyes, but she almost has the deer in the headlights expression. I'd like to see her gazing at him, or maybe looking slightly down, in repose. They don't have any connection, except for touching foreheads, if that makes sense.