Ha..well the border may be a bit distracting, as well as those things behind the horizontal bottle, but it surely gets it point across. Coulda used some blood and a severe burn mark or two though....just kidding. Thank you for not doing that. Good shot.
I get it. I like the concept. I want to see the green of those bottles. I do like the composition, but the sheet and blanket don;t look like the guy died in bed, not on a guerney or in a car.
Not sure the capabilities of your camera, but did you try a portrait mode view looking at the underside of both feet, shallowish DOF and the beer bottles and keys on the bed in the foreground? Something that would look more like an ad compain and not a hodge podge of ideas. 5 -danny
The idea is great but the POV could be improved a lot. I think the best thing would be to take a photo from the sole of your foot together with the empty bottles and maybe the car keys.