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11/26/2003 08:46:39 PM |
Greetings from the Critique Club:
A well done image, with good tones, contrast and lighting. Composition is also very good.
Perhaps the most critical I can be of this image, is simply that of subject: it doesn't stand on it's own. I understand you took it for the challenge, and that may be enough. Beyond that, I'm not sure where it's going: It's not recognizable by most (actually, at first I thought it was a carburetor!), yet its not really an abstract by most definitions (or at least mine: having stronger form or pattern focus than it is a pictoral representation of the object). And from a pure aesthetics, it's probably not something that I would hang on the wall.
But it's a very good capture for what it is and what you were using it for. |
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11/26/2003 03:46:14 PM |
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Well, no uneven light comments at least. Can't tell what it is? Well that's the whole point really - in challenge terms, looks like I'm guilty of under-simplification again. From my comments above: 'If you were told this was the release mechanism from a canister of VX nerve agent, would you know better?' Answer, no. |
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11/21/2003 11:23:23 AM |
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you FOUND one? What is this - I feel there is irony here that I'm missing, Is it perhaps part of a car engine? I like the b&w, perhaps colors wold detract from the simple composition. |
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11/21/2003 12:12:46 AM |
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Can't tell what it is. Normally I like abstract shots like this (this one is well done), but for this challenge it shouldn't be abstract because you can't tell what the message is. :( |
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11/20/2003 04:54:31 PM |
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i don't know what this is? |
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11/20/2003 01:24:06 PM |
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interesting, but I can't figure out what the heck it is |
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11/20/2003 10:56:04 AM |
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A beautiful image with very strong composition and fascinating textures but I have absolutely no idea what it is and therefore what the message might be. |
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11/20/2003 01:31:15 AM |
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I can't figure out what I'm looking at. |
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11/19/2003 10:33:22 PM |
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That is a really interesting picture. I hope you state what it is in your description. |
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11/19/2003 09:08:19 PM |
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If I could tell what it is, I might have a better feel for how this fits the title and/or challenge. It\'s an interesting display of lighting, lines and textures, but it doesn\'t seem to say anything to try to sway me. |
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11/19/2003 07:06:04 PM |
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I wish I could figure out what it is. It certainly makes an interesting picture, though I find the right bottom corner a bit too dark. |
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11/19/2003 05:04:36 PM |
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I can't make out what this is. Looks like my outdoor grill. Maybe you're in too close. Overall clarity and lighting are good. 6 -danny |
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11/19/2003 02:10:07 PM |
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I like this picture but for the life of me, and I have spent way to long looking at it, figure out what the object is. If I could identify the object and make a connection to the title I would have been able to give it a higher rating. [4] |
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11/19/2003 12:46:12 PM |
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so they're found at last ...... ;o) |
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11/19/2003 11:30:25 AM |
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I give up. What is it? Crisp, clear, but... |
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11/19/2003 06:27:51 AM |
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pardon my ignorance, but i can't recognise wat is the object featured here... therefore visualising the "weapon" u were saying was not possible for me. |
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11/19/2003 03:29:11 AM |
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Nice composition, interesting subject matter. 10. |
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11/19/2003 12:44:03 AM |
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It's late and my brain is not working. I cannot tell what this is. The photo is good but, without being able to tell what it is, it loses significance. |
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