If I were sjgleah (great guy) i would tell you that you probably need a semi-colon instead of a comma, and you shouldn't use a colon after a verb, but i'm NOT sjgleah, so i will tell you, i like the composition and simplicity of this shot. The pencil is a little soft to me, but not enough to be too detracting. I also like the angle of the pencil and how it points to the text. karmat
Very cute. The lighting is great. No distracting shadows or brightspots. No annoying reflections. You did a great job of framing this and I like the angle it was taken at. It could be my eyes playing tricks on me, but it looks likt the paper this was on is slightly curved in the middle making the top sentence kind of bow a little. Overall great job and good luck with the challenge.
Generally I am not keen on the shots where the actual text makes the point (just my preference), but like the composition regardless of what the text is. 5, Kavey
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