Seems very cluttered. My eye doesn't know exactly where to look first. Not a bad photo by any means. It just doesn't hold any WOW power for me persoanlly.
The title of this could be "Disection" LOL. Great job. Very creative and original. I like how it looks like you just stripped the lead right out of the pencil. Vocus, lighting and angle are all very good. Overall very nice photo. Good luck with the challenge.
Composition - quite good Technical Aspects - quite good Meets Challenge - yes Visual Impact / Originality – high/good Other suggestions – I'd like to see a little larger DOF here.
A pencil's undoing. I like it. I love the curves of the wood near the top. My eye follows the curve around and then rides the lead right back up. Nice. 8