Hi, I will be your Critique Clubber this week.
I don’t quite agree with the critique below that considers this image uninteresting. This is altogether quite intriguing. Probably shows my ignorance but I have no idea what this baroque object is all about. Is it children equipment? Fairy gear of some kind? Hairpin? A ballroom dagger?
The composition is harmonious but I personally would not encourage the tonal choice you made.
“Don't forget to leave your tooth under your pillow for the toothfairy...” probably lacks of the minimum brutality a slogan does require.
Had a look on you portfolio, you have a good sense of composition and seem to have mastered the technical side of things quite well. My advice to you would be to start worrying a little less on the aesthetic aspect but make yourself a point of allways telling a story with your photographs. Try also introducing more physical humanity in your images. This is maybe not the direction you want to go but I am sure this would make you progress.
All the best, JJ
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