i really dont get how the subject (which i am assuming is the man) is conveying hate, and he doesn't have any clear relationship to the window display.
a man is walking by a womens clothingstore..how does he hate himself? or am I really not getting this? Now if it were a big lady who would never fit those tiny dresses it would've made more sence to me.
hmm..i'm assuming your title refers to the writing on the shirt. Good eye to catch that. IMO, you should've allowed the man to walk by. If it was too crowded for that, you may have wanted to get closer to the subject. Thats just my opinion, and i've never broken 6 myself :-) good luck