I really like this portrait, its a nice step up from your battle of the sexes shot yall really look natural and the coloring and lighting is also great.
Nice. I like the expressions, and the arrangement next to the fire. It might be hard to do in this small space, but they (especially him) blend into the background a little too much. It would be good to have a hairlight or background light of some sort to give a little separation.
Really nice setting! I love the expressions on the subjects' faces; I just wish his face was in better focus. Looks like he moved a little at the wrong moment.