*Critique Club*
"My love" defiantly displays a common love that we all have, which makes it a good subject for the challenge.
I think you did a good jobs of using three objects to a create a good balance. I wonder if maybe we change the composition around it would have helped the score. Like possible shooting from the floor at that very low angle. Then maybe change the placement of the subject to give them some sort of shape, like having the lines of the laptop and cigarette run parallel or something. I think it is really hard to give idea without playing with the objects. Also the lighting seems a little harsh and blown out on the laptop screen. You might try adjust the contrast some to give the shot a little more depth.
Overall I think you touched on a great love that we all have and best of luck in your future challenges.
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