Great capture. I definitely feel like a voyeur evesdropping on a private moment. This photo makes me curious to know their story, which means it works.
good capture of emotion. i just feel this images needs to have another counterpoint to the couple. something to make me go...wow. like if the restaurant was called "Break Point". the conversion to b/w feels forced to me, like you did it because you thought you needed to submit in that format.
I really love the tonal quality used here. I would have liked to see more of their facial expressions but you can see some angst or hurt. Nice capture!
This is a really beautiful shot. IMO the couple could have been a bit sharper as they are your main subject but the tone and the angle are right on. Nice work. 7