When I open this one up, my eye is immediately drawn to the bright sky deep into the image. The problem is that there are no other elements that compete with that brightness to pull my eye away. I like your toning, but the image is a bit too dark overall to keep the voter's eye interested in the capture.
The lines lead the eye wonderfully, but nothing really appears to be in focus as the subject, at least for me. I can see the person's jacket is almost in focus, but still not quite. A cool shot though.
Really great shot, love the clarity and sharpness, love that my eyes lead me right up to the clock in the middle. Great composition. Awesome idea and setup. Nice work.