i think this would have been a little better if you POV were different. Maybe going towards a lower POV. this may have brought a little more into the shot. As it is i think it is a little weak. there is too much emptyness in the top 3rd of the shop and it distracts me a little. i might have also played with the contrast and looked for a better tonal range. good effort
Poor pup! I think this opportunity had great potential, and I like much of what you've done. However I think there is way too much sky included; I would crop it down to the point of the roof on the left side behind the old pickup myself. Hope the little dog learned his lesson and stays safe!