I wish the woman and the bags had been more in focus. I feel she blends too much into the background, when she should have stood out more (especially with the red bags). However, I know that you have to take what you get in street photography, so good luck with your shot.
Highlights on the glass window and the croping of the head are ditracting and there is certainly a scope of an improved focus on the subject. Like you idea but overall the image looks slightly weak
I am not quite sure about what I feel to the focus. I can't say what the blur adds to the mood and feelinf of the photo. I like your title, I like the colors, but mayeb I would like to see her more to the right or to the left of the photo, it would help to bring the movement idea to front.
that reflection on the window is very good, I wonder how it would look like from a bit different angle, so we could see that reflection more clear?
these are just my ideas:)