I would like to see more sharpness. Also, the subject seems a little difficult to pinpoint at first, perhaps if the shot was taken from a little further from the right placing the subject just to the left, since he is facing right and showing the onlookers more behind the subject. But still a great capture.
interesting angle, kind of hard to look at. processing is completely flat, but perhaps that helps fuel the tipsy perception you've created. not really what i would consider 'cartier-bresson' like, but it does provide me with a rather unique feeling inside, so good job.
while I like your concept here I think it is too muddy looking to go over well. I know that every photo doesn't have to be sharp and have high contrast but feel this one could use a bit of a boost.