Greetings from the Critique club.
You had a good idea with this one. Executed well it would have been a good fit for the challenge. There are a few areas you can improve on though.
First, as some commenters said, make the image bigger. You can have 640 on the longest side so try and use it all up!
Next, the lighting really is harsh. It looks like sunlight to me so there may not have been much you could do depending on where this nest was in your attic. Hanging a white sheet over the window would have been a good start.
Lastly, if you can, getting closer to fill more of the frame with the bird and the egg would have reduced the disctration of the grass in the next a bit.
Good idea!
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