A more shallow DoF might help draw the eye to the plant in the foreground. As it is here, your eye gets lost looking for the main subject of this shot.
I think this would of been better is there was a clear focal point - something to look at first and branch off so to speak. You do capture the randomness of nature though.
There is no point of focus which tends to make your eye wander all over and the direct flash is a little too harsh . Maybe next time try and zone into the plant a little more and try softening the light source.
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