This is Jess. shes a year bellow me at school.
shes the biggest rock star wannabe, and shes got the talent so maybe ill make alot of money out of these shots when shes rich and famous....o_O
went to school on a sunday to shoot this.
didnt really need too..
seeing as the picture i chose doesnt actually show the school!
...ahh well
dont expect to do to well.
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This B&W is nice and noise free :) I think your model could have looked a bit more "punk" but she is pretty and that certainly doesn't hurt this shot :) I like the rock wall behind her, it adds a lovely bit of hardness and texture to the composition. I love the different shapes you have going on too... the checks in the guitar strap, the lines on the guitar, and the stripes on her shirt and shorts. Very creative and well composed overall. Plus, it made me smile :)
I like the outfit and guitar - but I am not sure about the background - seems to take away from the image by being too busy. Also, I think this image could have been helped with a little better lighting on the 'rockstar's' face.
Love the black and white treatment on this, and the whole rock star up against the rocks thing. Kinda cool. The actual tonal range of the blacks and whites is good, but there is just too much gray for me - she almost blends into the rocks. I would also like to have seen this cropped in on the left just a bit so that she isn't so centered in the frame.