The layout is good, the lighting is good (within the concept) and I know this is a depiction rather than a take on the actual event. But- I can't get past the fact that you have "Adam" wearing a t-shirt.
I know, it's nit-picky, but it kinda jumped out at me.
original idea ... lighting on the side of the man's face is a bit harsh ... makes a deep shadow fall on the front of his face ... this may have been corrected by having him hold a reflector to try and eliminate the deep shadow ..
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