I love the concept you are tackling here. Lighting is very good. But I think the composition suffers a bit from 'bringing the viewer in too close'. I know you wanted the viewer to see the detail of the heart shape made by these pears but in doing so you don't let the pears themselves be a 'supporting' element. What I mean is that I think the viewer should see the pears that way we can further appreciate the shape that they make together. Here we are only given a portion when I think that the whole would improve the visual impact/appeal of the photo. A close cropped photo showing the two pears and the heart shape that they make together would make a stunning image. Not to mention that you would introduce us to some more shapes - that of the curvy shapes of the pears. Still this is an above average photo but showing us the whole of the supporting elements will move this into the exceptional category. 7