Composition is a bit weak and the pea on the right is quite 'messy'. Lighting is flat too and could be improved be creating more definition by moving the light source to one side.
I'm not certain that you needed any other pods and peas in view - why? They offer no benefit to your concept and serve only to clutter it. You would have found it very easy to compose just the pod on its own, but as it stands I would have placed the focused one to the bottom, right corner. |