The angle and lighting are great. I would like to have seen brighter colors in this. Definately has a humor factor. The focus on this is good. there are no distracting bright spots or shadows. nicely done. good luck in the challenge.
I took me a minute, but then i got it. :-) The colors are a little muted, guess you were trying to set the mood, and that makes it a little flat, otherwise, good idea, and thanks for the sense fo humor. karmat
ok, i have to admit, i had to smile when i first looked at this. the idea is great, however, the implementation doesn't totally overwhelm me. i think the blanket o nthe left adds a little too much confusion by being in layers, the colors are quite muted (which may be what you were going for, i just personally would've liked a little more color). i think overall, if you had it, a doll's bed would've really done the trick here. -- gr8photos (3)
LOL funny! If I were making little golf pencils I'd want a little more romantic atmosphere though....lol The focus could be a little better and just a tad brighter too. Cute though!
New Note: Okay, I'm back. I figured it out. The problem I had was I couldn't tell they were in a bed. It looked to me like the white was a man's shirt. I thought they were maybe jumping into a pocket of some sort. Perhaps if the framing had been a bit wider... I'm not sure. Original Note: I'm not sure I get it.
hehehehehehe... funny picture, hilarious title. The lighting is a little too low, and the image seems a little out of focus because of it. Points for humor.