This photo is ineffective because it gives the impression one just zoomed the camera in as far as it would go in hopes of impressing somebody with that. The picture needs to be wider and re-framed.
I really like this one. There's something about it. Could be how pretty your shallow depth of field background is -- or maybe that I love animals so much -- but the "in your face" razor sharp nose. . .well it just works for me :) So here's a VERY good score to go with his good sense of smell! 9