Author Thread Comments Made During the Challenge
Post actions
There is not enough head room or lead room in this shot. The result is it feels far too crowded.
Post actions
The head is cropped to harshly I think.
Post actions
Next time you may watnt to try a different light source.
Post actions
This is good but, appears to be blurry in around the eyes.
Post actions
Very nice, I can't tell if there is any focus.
Post actions
the soft focus works well here ... except for her eyes ... wish they were sharper ...
Post actions
Not quite focused correctly, it appears.
Post actions
Post actions
Color and subject are very nice but hte lack of focus really hurts this shot.
Post actions
I really like the lighting, kinda Jill Greenbergish. Too bad it's basic editing, and you can't do the Jill Greenberg processing. The image works well with the challenge topic, too. The only real problem I have is the overall softness. Since she's young and presumably still has perfect skin, I think it would be more effective if she were a touch sharper. But that's just one opinion. It's still a strong shot, regardless.
Post actions
Could have gone for 'Fill the Frame' with this shot :-)
Post actions
soft focus isn't helping this one. Shots likes this need the eyes in sharp focus, IMO.
Add photograph to your favorites
Add photographer to your favorites
Photographer found comment helpful.
