A very nice idea and I really like the lit cross on the left but the tower with the three lights on the right is very distracting. Maybe a different angle and/or different crop? Also there is a bit of noise in this shot and it too is distracting. A 5
I like to see Orion leaning into the picture at the top - but it doesn't balance the heavy brighness of the window - I wish it weren't so far to the left. The picture is very grainy? what ISO? Couldn't you use a long exposure and a tripod?
nice juxtapositions and contrasts here: the neon lighting and the stars of Orion, the natural beauty of the starlight and tree versus the brick building, the spire at the center and the cross at the left. I think moving the composition a little to the left so the cross is at the 1/3 mark might help, but losing the Orion's belt stars wouldn't be worth it.
I like the fact that this is non-traditional lighting. So many church pictures in this challenge, this stands out. I like Orion's belt there too! Good luck.
The shot is a bit dark, but I allow for different monitors so saved it and looked at it lighter. I don't particularly care for the bright white lighting. It's just too bright and too much of a contrast to the over all shot. I realize there is nothing you could of done about the light, but maybe taken this from a different perspective.