It\'s funny how in this early age children are so different already in their perceptions and attitude for life :)
For me it\'s not just something good, but greate, how they explore the world.
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My favorite from your portfolio thus far. It's wonderful how the children get their own corner in the frame. Being Basic I know you couldn't have cloned out the bike section there. I like the slight yellow cast adds a nice character to the shot, but the sand just appears slightly overly bright. I wouldn't mind seeing a version where you apply any PP you want to the shot, and just post it it on imageshack(create a free account). You can then post the link here if you want. If you need any help with that, you can PM or as some folks do post a resized original in the forum and let people have a go at it, see which one you like best and try to get that result yourself :)
Tnx for your comments, Send was not orignally so yellow, it was more kind of rose, to leave it like this was not interesting to me, though may be I should not make such strong contast which brings saturation.
About the weel of bicycle - I should eliminate it somehow.
About the content I'm 100% sure, You can read in description above. For me is not just good it's greate to see children discover and learn about life in sand-box.
Ops, the title should be "Sea of sand".
Interesting composition which breaks a lot of rules, I guess. You'd think one child should be in the lower riht corner, but he's moved to the top right.
Yellow cast? Kids are kinda scattered about without a particular focus, actually all of them are looking out of the picture which tends to leave a bit empty area in the middle making me wonder why shoud I look here? Sorry, only a 4. Jack
I like the composition quite a lot, the kids playing by themselves and in pairs at the corners of the image. The biggest problem with the image is the colors look a bit oversaturated and yellow. A smaller problem is the bicycle (or whatever it is) in the corner. Maybe you could have taken a step closer to the girl, to be able to crop out the bike.
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