What can I say about this? I'm sure you've had many comments about the white thing...
-the white surface she is lying on is the dominant feature in this photo. Its distracting and unsightly. For an outdoor scene, a wooden table or a patterned blanket maybe would look better?
-employ a shallow depth of field to blur the background. One, it looks cooler and more professional, two...shes in a rather ugly setting, with metal posts and road signs in the way.
Your model has natural beauty...make her the center of attention! With some more trial and error, I'm sure you could produce a stunning photo in the future, best of luck! |