Lovely shot. I may steal this idea in the future. I think the only improvements would be her hand placement looks slightly unnatural, and the flower seems a bit physically flattened.
Really nice image. Really horrible lighting. The on camera flash creates an unflattering harsh and flat light with ugly shadows. You could have greatly improved this by bouncing the flash off a larger white surface. A wall, piece of styropour or even a white sheet. 7
Nice lighting and composition, the softness makes this almost look like a painting. If I am being really picky I woud have cloned out the white dots that I can see on the background :o) (just my humble opinion)
ohh this has little bit of this less. This has little bit of that more. What if you had put that thing more.
ohh leave all this and that, its beautiful composition, very much appreciated.
lighting a tad harsh for the beautiful subject! do try again with lighting adjustment. Try not cutting off the flower, and reveal more of the curve of the hip to the belly