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02/04/2007 05:34:32 PMPost actions
Great use of the edge of the frame as a box, however I don't feel any depth to the image. I also think that the desat makes it feel even more flat and lacking of depth.
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02/04/2007 04:38:08 PMPost actions
the crop is very good to give the feeling of being trapped. not sure i am getting that from the face though.
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02/03/2007 05:36:36 PMPost actions
this could also work for fill the frame ;)
I think b/w would also be very nice.
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02/03/2007 01:54:27 PMPost actions
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02/01/2007 08:28:39 PMPost actions
Excellent take on the challenge. I really like the way you have "boxed" in your model with perfect cropping. I would like to see more contrast.
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02/01/2007 01:14:44 AMPost actions
Nice glow and wonderful lighting. 8
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01/31/2007 05:24:07 AMPost actions
good crop. pose looks awkward, though
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01/30/2007 06:09:42 PMPost actions
Love the confined box within the frame.
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01/30/2007 02:03:34 PMPost actions
Looks trapped - and he must have been in there a long time because he's quite pale. Good lighting.
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01/30/2007 03:44:34 AMPost actions
The ultra tight framing here works very well for this shot, IMO. Nice job.
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01/29/2007 11:08:01 PMPost actions
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01/29/2007 03:42:20 PMPost actions
I can see it looks like you are trapped in a box. The image doesn't work as the on camera flash creates a flat lifeless image. More directional and side lighting would improve the image.
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01/29/2007 10:41:03 AMPost actions
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01/29/2007 06:47:50 AMPost actions
More dramatic sidelighting instead of what looks like front-on flash would have improved this image greatly
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01/29/2007 04:33:10 AMPost actions
well done good image artistic 10
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01/29/2007 03:51:52 AMPost actions
I think you should've payed a little more attention to your pp. the hair looks strangely greyish, and I can't say I like the pose.
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01/29/2007 02:35:11 AMPost actions
Ah, we had a similar idea!
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01/29/2007 01:10:11 AMPost actions
I wish the lighting wasn't so straight on but that aside I really like what you're trying to do here.
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01/29/2007 12:32:18 AMPost actions
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